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Listen To The Whisper Of The Eternal Wind
As It Gently Touches Your Ear;
Guiding You Through The Forest Of Life
Your Friend; Your Companion; Your Seer.

Listen To The Whisper Of Verdant Leaves
Adorning The Sentinels Of Earth;
Silently Watching The Passing Of Time
Its Beauty The Blessing Of Birth.

Listen To The Whisper Within The Heart
Where Soft Emotions Caress Its Beat;
Let Its Wisdom Flow Right Over Your Soul
And Dormant Love It Will Entreat.

Listen To The Whisper, All Three Of Them
Embrace And  Entwine Deep Within;
And When They Merge Within Your Soul
A New Pathway You Will Begin
Listen To The Beauty Of Love
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Quite a wonderful work. The whipers that you have discussed really do have their impact and the imagery and expressions merge well together with the rhyming to produce a serene work. It especially reads well aloud and I really enjoyed the ending... other than the ending rhyme of finishing the work with begin... it felt sort of forced.
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Ember-24 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're so good at creating images and it's so relaxing! :) I feel so much better after reading this since earlier I had a rough day. I love it! ♥
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks - may each day be a relaxing day for you
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Ember-24 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks ♥
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birduncaged Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Again... so lovely!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks again
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Peekeeboo Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so profound. I love the image of the whisper because God came to Elijah in just that way. A beautiful verse!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Feel free to check my site for other poems
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Peekeeboo Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. I hope you don't mind that I downloaded it. I just wanted to have it handy to re-read again. So inspiring!!!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Feel free to download any other poems on my site and share them with family and friends
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