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Listen To The Whisper Of The Eternal Wind
As It Gently Touches Your Ear;
Guiding You Through The Forest Of Life
Your Friend; Your Companion; Your Seer.

Listen To The Whisper Of Verdant Leaves
Adorning The Sentinels Of Earth;
Silently Watching The Passing Of Time
Its Beauty The Blessing Of Birth.

Listen To The Whisper Within The Heart
Where Soft Emotions Caress Its Beat;
Let Its Wisdom Flow Right Over Your Soul
And Dormant Love It Will Entreat.

Listen To The Whisper, All Three Of Them
Embrace And  Entwine Deep Within;
And When They Merge Within Your Soul
A New Pathway You Will Begin
Listen To The Beauty Of Love
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Quite a wonderful work. The whipers that you have discussed really do have their impact and the imagery and expressions merge well together with the rhyming to produce a serene work. It especially reads well aloud and I really enjoyed the ending... other than the ending rhyme of finishing the work with begin... it felt sort of forced.
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Ember-24 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're so good at creating images and it's so relaxing! :) I feel so much better after reading this since earlier I had a rough day. I love it! ♥
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks - may each day be a relaxing day for you
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Ember-24 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks ♥
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birduncaged Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Again... so lovely!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks again
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Peekeeboo Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so profound. I love the image of the whisper because God came to Elijah in just that way. A beautiful verse!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Feel free to check my site for other poems
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Peekeeboo Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. I hope you don't mind that I downloaded it. I just wanted to have it handy to re-read again. So inspiring!!!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Feel free to download any other poems on my site and share them with family and friends
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Manigran Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful, deep and spiritual.
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Feel free to check my site for other poems
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Manigran Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome.
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Sly-The-Foxx Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just wrote a poem the other day about Spirit Guides, and then I stumble across this. It was wonderfully written. The rhythm flowed perfectly and I loved the content it held.
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Feel free to check my site for other poems
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student Writer
This is a very sweet poem! :D It's so unique, and I love how each word is brought out, supporting the idea that each word is significant. Beautiful work~
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Feel free to check my site for other poems
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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MikaelaMB Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really nice work! Congrats :heart:
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Feel free to check my site for other poems
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Minimjush Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist
very beautiful!!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Feel free to check my site for other poems
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Minimjush Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist
what is your site called, then? :333
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bestgmx Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
beautiful words :)
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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winter33 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, you're a very expressive and emotional writer. This gives your work a lot of interest that grab the readers attention. Your work is beautiful and will touch many people, you seem like a very loving person.:#1:
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I wish the world would embrace the truth of God's love
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winter33 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome, hope you write more awesome pieces.:)
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Amanda-Graham Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Yes it is. WhiteLighter please withdraw the work from the Featured folder on Love-Literature and resubmit to the Poetry folder.

Thank you,

Mandy
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry it got deleted in error from the correspondence stack so I can't withdraw it - anything you can do?
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SunnyMar19 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful:heart:
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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SunnyMar19 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome:D
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Shasta-Rose Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful with a natural rhyme and a unique style. Personally since you're talking about leaves, which are flowing, I wouldn't use the capitalization effect here. Thank you for sharing this.
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for taking the time to comment
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Adonael Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
'Listen To The Whisper Of Verdant Leaves
Adorning The Sentinels Of Earth;'

I particularly liked those lines :)
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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Adonael Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No worries.
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saykha Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Writer
Very beautifully written :heart:
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you - Peace and Love be with you always
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