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Natures Tears Splash To The Earth
To Flowers And Trees They Offer Birth
Soil Caress The Warmth Of The Sun
Life's Mysteries Which Gaia Has Won

Creation Stirs Behind The Veil Of Time
Bringing Forth A New Era That Of Mankind
Though But An Ember In Natures Fires
None Has Such Strange Whims And Desires

The Candle Flickers, The Flame Dies
The Innocent Child Softly Sighs
Knowing No Shadows In Life's Light
Free From The Darkness Of Human Plight

Delicate In Thought Like Threads Of Silk
Weaved And Adorned With Gaia's Milk
Purity Of Spirit Is What Was Meant To Be
And Such A Child Shall Live For Eternity
All we need to do is to recapture what we once had.
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karicom333 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
Really beautiful
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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karicom333 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
You're Welcome =)
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Ember-24 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful. ♥ I love how my name is mentioned^^
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TEMPERATE-SAGE Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
You have been featured! =D [link]
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   General Artist
way cool imagery!
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. Though the theme is vast and left to the reader to assume (well most poetry is so nothing bad there) the expressions used, and the terminology is exceptional like:

Delicate In Thought Like Threads Of Silk
Weaved And Adorned With Gaia's Milk

Love it :)
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks again
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No Tension (my way of saying you are welcome)
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rentunumber2 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice when u say gaia do u mean www.gaiaonline.com
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gaia is basically (usually at least) another term for nature or the mysterious powers that govern nature.
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rentunumber2 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you i so just learned something new
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome :)
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FloweroftheValleyxD Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student General Artist
did you write this? It's really good :)
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I've several other poems on my site you may like
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KodokuNoNana Featured By Owner May 30, 2012   General Artist
Beautiful

Good job!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
This is really good!
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
You're welcome
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like thus one. My favourite part is the third stanza :)
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for your feedback. I've other poems, drawings and photos on my site you may like
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure and okay I will watch you and see your wonderful artwork :)
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lintu47 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, your work has been selected to be in #Genuine-ART's Featured Corner.
Have a nice day,

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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I have other works I'd like to share but sadly you only accept 1 per folder every 30 days. Love and Peace to all
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TheWhiteLighter Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Have a great week-end
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lintu47 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :huggle:
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